This week I have been spending extra time with my story, so I decided to let you read the first paragraph:
My name used to be Annika Luisa Matthews.
I lived in a big brown house on the corner of Oak Street and Acorn Boulevard.
I used to have a big family. I used to have a mom, a dad, an older sister named Annalisia, the little twins Nate and Eve, and the new baby Genevieve Lea.
I used to go to St. John’s junior high.
I used to never be afraid.
But I’m different now.
But I’ll never forget that day that my life changed forever.
Ever.
What did you think? I know it's very vauge, but I don't want it to give too much away. Comment with any suggestions!!
What did you think? I know it's very vauge, but I don't want it to give too much away. Comment with any suggestions!!
wow...thats a pretty interesting beginning for your story.....Keep it up. And I hear that you have started count down for your India trip...me too. Looking forward for your Zuccinni muffins...
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